Audience Feedback

Yesterday I asked a class of AS students what they thought of my CD Cover, Magazine Ad and Tour Ad. I got both negative and positive feedback this post it to bullet point summarise what the class said.
CD Cover
Comments;

• Font is minorly illegible
• Font and image fit each other and the genre well
• Colours work well
• Needs more that just a cover

Changes;

• Consider other fonts carefully to make alternatives and have them re-evaluated by audience 
• Expand to full digipak

Magazine Ad
Comments;

• Stars are good touch/match genre (Popular rock tatoo)
• Fonts work well
• Grammar needs correcting
• Layout is convenional makes it easily recognisable and professional looking
• House style fits with CD Cover
• Colours work well especially the Red

Changes;

• Correct Grammar

Tour Ad;
Comments;

• Colours work well
• Image would be better focused
• Image is good but should demand more attention
• Represents genre well
• Convertional looking (dates at bottom)

Changes;

• Create alternative layouts without moving dates for re-evaluation.